Embezzlement (Rare)

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Embezzlement (Rare)

Postby Donald Trump » Tue Dec 13, 2016 8:54 pm

Name - Embezzlement
Rarity - Rare
Special Effect - Undercover
Duration - 24 Hours
Effect - Target player does not receive a payment from their countries royal stipends. Royal Stipend money is lost.


Extra Effect (optional)
Fraud - If the target player has cast onto you before. 25% of the Royal Stipend money goes to the caster.

OR

If the target player cast onto you before. x% of the Royal Stipend money goes to the caster.

x = Amount of turns contributed X 2.

Max = 15 turns
Last edited by Donald Trump on Mon Dec 19, 2016 6:58 pm, edited 5 times in total.
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Re: Closed Treasury (Rare)

Postby Shadowood » Tue Dec 13, 2016 9:23 pm

Is the money lost to the Nether Relm? Or does it go back into treasury for later disbursement?

It should be lost.
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Re: Closed Treasury (Rare)

Postby Donald Trump » Tue Dec 13, 2016 9:28 pm

Edited.
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Re: Closed Treasury (Rare)

Postby Shadowood » Tue Dec 13, 2016 9:46 pm

I like this one Chin. I would also add that it should be Undercover. Same, whatever formula the others go by to remain undercover.

And maybe use the name "Garnishment". Just like in RL where your check is Garnished for what ever reason.
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Re: Closed Treasury (Rare)

Postby Donald Trump » Tue Dec 13, 2016 10:11 pm

I think there is a good enough of hidden voodoo out there. Rather keep it the way it is.
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Re: Closed Treasury (Rare)

Postby Captain meow » Wed Dec 14, 2016 2:56 am

NOPE MEOW !!!!!
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Re: Closed Treasury (Rare)

Postby Donald Trump » Wed Dec 14, 2016 2:58 am

I wanted to be a taxidermist and veterinarian. You know, so they get the animal back regardless.

This cute kitten is now a devil.
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Re: Closed Treasury (Rare)

Postby Captain meow » Wed Dec 14, 2016 2:59 am

purrr
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Re: Closed Treasury (Rare)

Postby Donald Trump » Mon Dec 19, 2016 4:10 am

Bump!

My opinion.

More game mechanic implementation = More game voodoo.
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Re: Closed Treasury (Rare)

Postby William one eye » Mon Dec 19, 2016 6:30 pm

Closed treasury would imply that the money did not leave the national treasury and should still belong to the government.

if the money is lost I would call it

- Embezzlement - a treasury worker stole the payment
or perhaps Audit - the payment is tied up in red tape permanently

could be a damaging card for a player or a used against a nation.

you could change it to Fraud and the casting player could receive all or a % the stipend payment - however this may be taking it to far.
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