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Demon of the Blue (Story)

PostPosted: Sun Feb 05, 2017 6:51 pm
by Donald Trump
Demon of the Blue


Setting: Port of Glasgow, UK, 1702.

The winter's white flurries across the land, as the smoke and ash from chimneys fill the skies of Glasgow. I wake up alone outside a tavern. It is so cold, so dark, so silent. Everyone is at home, while I live outside the Tavern. Life had never treated a soul so damning I thought to myself. To live without a home, and to only have the scraps of clothing left to keep me alive. I breathe into my blistered hands in order to retain heat. The frost continues to forever invade my mustache and beard. There is no stopping this eternal pain.

Nearby an elderly man spots me outside the window of his Inn. He slowly makes his way to me. Freezing, he begs for me to enter the Inn. I reluctantly enter. He has his maid prepare a broth for me, in which I push aside his silverware and hastily drink down. He was a retired colonel with a wealth and status beyond one I could ever envision. He told his stories of the English Civil War. How he had lost his family, but had garnered estate for his loyalty to the Parliamentarians. How he had saved the lives of plenty. A good man indeed; never have I met such a kind soul to take a homeless man into his estate and treat him like a human. After the dining, he was drowsy and could no longer talk; he went to sleep. He mumbled at his maid to prepare a bed for me to lay down in for the night. She had done so and left.

I view the decorations of the man's home, and finds the most elegant of silver and gold. I made a sack with the bed sheets, and ever so silently stacked his precious metals into the sack. I silently left the Inn with the bag of silver and gold....




A short introductory to a possible story. Maybe if I get enough feedback, I will continue.

Re: Demon of the Blue (Story)

PostPosted: Sun Nov 26, 2017 11:19 pm
by Jack Teach
Nice

Re: Demon of the Blue (Story)

PostPosted: Mon Nov 27, 2017 12:30 am
by Shadowood
Great start Chin. I look forward to more.

Re: Demon of the Blue (Story)

PostPosted: Mon Nov 27, 2017 12:43 am
by PFH
Shadowood wrote:Great start Chin. I look forward to more.

This was soo long ago :D :D

But it is a good start :o:

Re: Demon of the Blue (Story)

PostPosted: Mon Nov 27, 2017 12:45 am
by William one eye
Check your history, glasgow was not in the uk for
a few more years

Re: Demon of the Blue (Story)

PostPosted: Mon Nov 27, 2017 1:34 am
by Stan Rogers
William one eye wrote:Check your history, glasgow was not in the uk for
a few more years


That had to be a lot of work...moving a whole city ! :y

Re: Demon of the Blue (Story)

PostPosted: Mon Nov 27, 2017 1:59 am
by Jack Teach
Kinda mean you took his stuff though

Re: Demon of the Blue (Story)

PostPosted: Mon Nov 27, 2017 5:14 am
by William one eye
Should be new port glasgow,
You would not be able to see chiminey smoke from glasgow, its to far away.
And while Scotland was ruled by the British monarch,
The united kingdom had not yet been formed.


Also your colonel would be very old for the time period.

All that aside, i enjoyed reading it, and would like to read more.

Re: Demon of the Blue (Story)

PostPosted: Mon Nov 27, 2017 6:02 am
by DezNutz
William one eye wrote:Check your history, glasgow was not in the uk for
a few more years


5 Years to be exact, and technically the "UK" wasn't called the "UK" for almost another 100 years later. The official title from 1707 until 1800 was Great Britain.