Novel Teaser

[Admiral Nelson]

Ahoy there folks!

Some of you may already know I am making a novel based on the game if you do not know - Well now you do, right?

I have been working on this novel for 2 weeks now, a hour or two every day - I have decided to give you a teaser on what it will be like ( Please note, it will be longer). The aim of this novel is to have a certain degree of accuracy and inform players of what has happened - But due to the 'context' I do have to make some of it fiction. It will be about what I did last year. ( John Avery's first few days to December ) It will feature other players explaining what happened.

I do not know the date of it will be finished, for it is a big project - But, I will post this teaser.


Hello there, my name is detective Pete I am 48 years old. The law recruited me from School when I was only 14 years old. I am here to tell the tale of John Avery, so you know the real John Avery the crimes he has committed the people he has killed, including my own family. So when I was offered this job, I sure did accept! He must be brought to justice!

When the King of Avonmora was asked about John Avery he stated “ Not much was known about John Avery until he was at least 16 years old; due to the town hall of where he lived got burned down just before Pirate Roberts down. I am sure today, the file on John Avery is 5 feet deep, but this was not always the case. When asked the same question, Stan Rogers declared that he did know John Avery when he was a nobody, and that he flew under a different name back then which was ‘Admiral Nelson’. According to Stan he was a good merchant, just a shame of what he had turned into.

Lana unlike everybody else knows who John Avery was even when he was just a kid at the age of 6. If anybody who he was, it would be her. It was only found out, that he would not be alive today if Lana would not of taken him that week Pirate Roberts was killed. Danik, the most humorous person in Avonmora at his time declared: “ I remember first seeing John Avery when he was 14 years old; when he was recruited by the good folk of Ayes! You should of seen the donkeys they were angry when they had to give up a bed for him! So we built Avery a new place to stay. Donkeys must live luxurious lives, no matter what!”

Of course, there were always rumours about John Avery since he ‘emergeged’ from Ayes that day. Some say his dad was a Merchant and a good one at that – he was reeking in up to 25 million gold coins a day, so they said. Others would say his dad was a pirate from Singapore, who stole several ships in his time; died when officials came after him.

Both of those options, would have been better then who his actual dad was I feel like, now that I know who he actually is, that he should of died over at his house so no one would die!

The spud, the lettuce or the potato named Juicy said “I had bumped into John Avery a few times before I actually know who he was not that I paid much attention to him though. But what he has done to me, I am one of the many that wish he would the world of his filth.
When Kart told me about this, he sounded a tad bit upset with what he was saying or at least his actions that helped John Avery in his early days. “ I remember when John Avery first contacted me under the name of Admiral Nelson – If I recall correctly he use to sell me 50 credits at a time, not that I needed them. But I was always one to help new players it’s a damn shame what he turned into, it breaks my heart!


Opinions on the Novel is welcome.

Tell me what you guys think!

[Bmw]

seems like it would be good.

[Lana]

Waiting for more!

[Haron]

Seems nice. I hope you find the time to finish it! :-)

[Mugiwara]

i would like to read full story. its already have nice parts wondering more about it.