Role Play - The Hair of the Dog Pub - Seaglory

[Jack Teach]

Jack draws his cutlass. Prepare to repel boarders, and you, Mr. gibson (his quartermaster) order the men to continue the cannon assault, our ship has more than enough crew to do so. Jack's men grab weapons and fight like hell. A line of enemy marines fire their muskets, killing several men, but they are soon overrun. Jack runs into the fray shooting pistols and slashing cutlass. The invincible's guns are still firing, sinking one of the ships boarding his. Thea air is filled with smoke, the sounds of swords and guns fill the air, as well as the screams of dying men. The pirates and royal navy sailors fight with such viciousness, that there is not an inch of anything not covered in blood. Jack runs forward, he skewers several men in a matter of seconds. The fighting gets more vicious, the pirates begin to lose ground. Until, a couple of small, extra cannons are brought on deck and fired. Men die in droves but it lasts not long, the Royal Navy sailors begin to gain even more ground. Jack then signal-handedly defeats a large amount of enemies via tossing grenades. Not so tough now, are you? Jack and men defeat the boarders, but the enemy ships are still afloat and currently sailing away to get in better firing range. Run out the guns, let's send them all to the bottom. The broadsides again start, firing rapidly, but not as rapidly, as Jack lost many men in the fray.

[Grimrock Litless]

I think it would help to read better if you guys add " to the front and backs of speech points.

And Spacing between speeches and actions.

Like,
I drew the sword!

"Time for battle!!!" Said I

If you guys plan on letting people read, do not make big pile of words that make it hard to read.

[Jack Teach]

In a couple of hours, the ships enemy ships went to the bottom. Jack laughs. The invincible' men storm the shore and fight the soldiers in the street. In a couple hours, the enemy soldiers have no idea where jack is, and they can't attack the ship, as it has more guns there own fort. Jack is sitting in the tavern, drinking rum and laughing.

[William one eye]

William,has acquired a room for the night at the Hair of the Dog. His head is clouded from the many glasses of rum he drank with the man in the shadows. What happened to Jack, Why were people fighting in the harbor. How much did I actually drink? He reaches his room, goes inside and latches the door. He opens a small wooden case, given to him by the Man he spoke with. Inside are two rather odd looking pistols. They are matchlocks with a revolving cylinder that holds 8 shots each. Upon inspection he sees they are already loaded. While these are very practical and should prove useful, the man at the table was not his contact, just an old friend. William hears voices in the hall. A drunken man with a lady of the night. But something does not seem right. The man seems to drunk, almost as if..... They crash in to Williams door, it gets quiet and there is a knock. William opens the door.

Monty, why are you dressed like that and why is Feniks pretending to be drunk?

Sorry, wrong room, they mutter. They say nothing else. They stumble down the hallway and disappear. It would seem Feniks dropped his saber.
Will picks up the saber, it is not Feniks, but his own.

I have missed you

Will says to the saber. He notices a note wrapped around the handle. The note reads Shadowood Bay of Regis

[Jack Teach]

Jack teach knocks on the door. mate, did you see the fight? It was glorious, you should've been there. Jack takes a sip of rum. I'd be happy to tell you all about, if you like.

[Grimrock Litless]

But really tho, you 2 have mostly been the ones "role playing" that it has become more of a story than anything.
Maybe because you 2 have been ignoring people who try to enter the story. Eh, whatever.

[William one eye]

But really tho, you 2 have mostly been the ones "role playing" that it has become more of a story than anything.
Maybe because you 2 have been ignoring people who try to enter the story.

Why dont you join in, instead of complaining,

[Jack Teach]

Jack looks at grimrock. what the hell are you talking about?

[Grimrock Litless]

"Indeed, what am I talking about."

[William one eye]

I am not going to get any rest with you two bickering out here in the hall way, lets go back down to the pub for some more drinks

Will grabs the pistols from the box, he tucks them into holsters and steps out into the hallway