by William one eye » Fri Jul 24, 2020 5:50 am
Composure wise its decent.
Technical skill of playing is also good.
Constructive critiscim, wise
Its pretty stiff, you guys need to add some dynamics. Its so flat it could be mistaken for a midi synth reading sheet music.
Listen to some exodus, its got a groove and dynamics to it while still being heavy and tight.
Does it sound like that when you play it live?
It could be your recording process .
If its how you actualy sound, try this.
Good way to get a bit of groove
Learn some reggae or groove based punk like operation ivy or rancd. Even its not what you want to play, its good to step out of your zone for a moment. A tiny bit of the swing from it may sneak into your music.